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Life's Little Pitfalls

Life's little pitfalls All alone in the world without any help from anyone. I struggle through life's little pitfalls. I reach a goal but stumble back further. I cry and scream then continue the struggle again. I finally reach the top of the struggle so secure and on my way, but once again, life's little pitfalls appear pushing me back further than the last time. I've reached a point of no return. Because, no matter what i do or say life's little pitfalls won't let go and go away

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Date: 4/10/2016 1:51:00 AM
tammy brown, you've expressed yourself well, I enjoyed your poem. **LINDA**
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Date: 4/10/2010 9:09:00 AM
sad write, welcome to poetry soup--hope you find much happiness and inspiration here.
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Date: 4/3/2010 3:25:00 PM
A deep poem-a bit sad -If this is written third person then great-But if its your true feeling and your going through this constantly I ask that you keep the faith,just knowt that the lord only gives you what you can handle,it is so your strength increases--deep write-and God bless on this The eve of thy resurection rick--Salem ,oregon--stay strong
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