Notes About The Poem

" THE TRIP " MY PHOTO, ©

May be a closeup of rose and nature

Life's Journey

My trip towards mortality

Started from the day I was born

The length of my journey unknown 

But I'm certain to reach my bourn!









©  Demetrios Trifiatis
       20 May 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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May 20, 2021 at 12:39 PM
Dearest friend Demetrios, I wish you a long, happy, and sound life, what you said is appropriate. We are destined to die one day, and we need to enjoy life towards that unknown end.
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May 20, 2021 at 1:39 PM
Thank you for your heartfelt wishes, my dearest friend, Lasaad. I also thank you for your kind visit and comment. Blessings.
Alex Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 10:39 AM
True Philosophy
Trifiatis Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 10:43 AM
Thank you, dear, Alex! Blessings.
Krutsinger Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 8:11 AM
I am seeing a theme here, Demetrios. Should I be concerned? Or in awe?
Trifiatis Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 8:29 AM
Yes, you see, dearest Caren! It is the theme of mortality that concerns all of us! Blessings and hugs xxx
Y. Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 6:56 AM
WoW! Demetrios, Your poetry is wise and profound. Our stay here is only temporary. I echo what Anne- Lise said. Well done- Alexis
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May 20, 2021 at 7:38 AM
Delighted to see you, my loving friend, Alexis. Thank you so much for your precious visit. Hugs xxx
Pandit Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 4:38 AM
Immortal truth my friend! Blazing colors in your photo.
Trifiatis Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 7:36 AM
At least something is...immortal, my dearest friend, Vijay. Thank you so much for your kind comment. Blessings.
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May 20, 2021 at 2:58 AM
- The length of life's journey is unknown to all of us ... therefore we must enjoy every day as if it were the last ... a great poem, Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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May 20, 2021 at 3:55 AM
True and true, my dearest friend, Anne-Lise. Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment! Hugs xxx
Cunningham Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 12:50 AM
Im sure one day you and all mankind will, A thought provoking verse Demetrios. Tom PS. Congrats for yesterdays poem being chosen as POTD.
Trifiatis Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 12:55 AM
You are amazing my dearest friend, Tom! You have become synonymous with good news! Thank you so much for letting me know and for all your support. Blessings!
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