Life's Hourglass

As I hold you in my embrace
I wish I could freeze time..
Looking into your angelic face
Encourages me to write a Rhyme!

I wish the taste of your lips
Could forever remain on mine..
The mere softness of your hips
Were perfected upon design!

Your smile is locked in my memory
And your gentle giggle is, too.
If I was to ask; him or me?
I’d hope you’d choose me to love you!

I get lost in your gorgeous dark eyes
And I’d rather not be found..
Let me show you paradise,
For as my queen you’ll surely be crowned!

We.. Locked, intertwined for all eternity
Melded together into one organism
I wanna swim through this energy
And be fed with your eroticism!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Mccoy Avatar
September 7, 2011 at 12:22 AM
I wish I could find a love like that.Well done and keep it up!
Mckenzie Avatar
September 2, 2011 at 6:20 PM
Jimmy my friend I've been gone for so long I've missed your work on the soup., you just keep getting better and better! How are you ? By the way I love this passionate write! Laura :)
Haick Avatar
August 31, 2011 at 4:06 PM
Amazing poem.. well-written, Jimmy. Love, Annalise
Brown Avatar
August 30, 2011 at 8:08 AM
awwwwwww Jimmy I love this poem. Going to put it in my favs. I hope you are back and will write and post more Jimmy. Love, Carol
Anderson Avatar
August 31, 2011 at 3:33 PM
Thank you very much Carol..Will try to. JMA
Cooke Avatar
August 29, 2011 at 4:04 PM
lost in your gorgeous dark eyes, and i rather not be found. love this, classic love poetry.a beautiful write
Anderson Avatar
August 31, 2011 at 3:34 PM
Thnx. Steve. JMA
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