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Life's Great Sin

It was on an old dirt road, back in the country That I first tasted of life’s great sin In the backseat of that old sedan That I borrowed from one of my kin I thought I knew everything But she taught me a lot more A rookie she laughingly called me As she blew cigarette smoke out the door

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Date: 3/19/2014 7:21:00 AM
She probably would say I've grown up quite a lot since those early days.
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Date: 3/18/2014 11:15:00 AM
Very good. [wonder if she'd call you that now! :) ] // paul
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