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Waves of sadness wash over me like the tide. We had a love so bright, and now I’m empty inside. They say you can’t go back in time, But I would go back when our love was still sublime. Divorce is like mourning the death of someone close, And now that person is like an unfamiliar ghost. Weeks go by and you think you are doing okay, But really you are just keeping the memories at bay. I finally see the flowers after the summer rain, And I realize life still holds joy, and not just pain. God has a new life for me, of that I am sure. This is a bump in the road… life’s grand detour. Our life together is now a closed door, And I have other new adventures to explore. I can laugh again now, and forget my distress, Because deep down I know that I am still blessed. 3/24/16 When a Door Closes Contest Sponsor: Broken Wings Awarded 2nd Place

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Date: 4/6/2016 11:15:00 PM
Brenda, Congrats on your "When A Door Closes WIN." Luv ~LINDA~
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Brenda Mcgrath
Date: 4/7/2016 8:52:00 AM
Thank you Linda!
Date: 4/5/2016 9:12:00 AM
Hi Brenda, Congratulations on your win in the contest. I enjoy the fact that another door opens Brenda. An excellent write deserving of a seven.Hugs....Mike
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Brenda Mcgrath
Date: 4/5/2016 10:07:00 AM
Thank you Mike!
Date: 4/4/2016 9:03:00 AM
Your works are truly heartfelt Brenda! I enjoyed this one! Congratulations and a 7 for you! :) _HANS
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Brenda Mcgrath
Date: 4/4/2016 9:37:00 AM
Thank you Hans!
Date: 4/4/2016 3:11:00 AM
Congrats on ur wonderful win with this very awesome poem Brenda..
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Brenda Mcgrath
Date: 4/4/2016 7:34:00 AM
Thank you Dr. Sharma!

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