Life's Fantasy

White puffy clouds, billowing pillows

   Light lavender skies o'er water-fed willows

Reed-grasses to breeze's breath sway

   Life's fantasy, a riverbank in May
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Kiser Avatar
June 27, 2020 at 12:52 PM
I have one thing to say...Ahhhhh.......
Krutsinger Avatar
June 27, 2020 at 5:19 AM
Ah, so delicate and pretty. Your imagery makes me feel lighter.
Somadas Avatar
June 25, 2020 at 1:39 AM
Wonderful flow and imagery.. Great couplets Gershon..
Mcguire Avatar
June 24, 2020 at 11:20 PM
I like the flow of this one, enjoyabe
Wolf Avatar
June 24, 2020 at 11:39 PM
TYSM, Timothy. Cheers, Gershon
Buehler Avatar
June 24, 2020 at 11:01 PM
Really pretty, dreamy and relaxing. It makes me want to lie on the riverbank and watch the scenery. Best of wishes, Evelyn
Wolf Avatar
June 24, 2020 at 11:39 PM
Just remember now, Evelyn, when you're on that riverbank: Mask firmly held in place, but don't lose your grip and fall in the H2O!! Then again, that may give you great material for your next spectacular poetic narrative! ~ All Wet
Kauffman Avatar
June 24, 2020 at 10:04 PM
Love this - beautiful, peaceful picture, Gershon. So fun to see your expanded horizons! All the best!
Wolf Avatar
June 24, 2020 at 11:37 PM
Expanding horizons...attaining Krishna consciousness...cosmic revelations forthcoming... Thanks, Sam. ~ SOM (Silly Old Me)
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