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Life's Fantasy

White puffy clouds, billowing pillows Light lavender skies o'er water-fed willows Reed-grasses to breeze's breath sway Life's fantasy, a riverbank in May

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 6/27/2020 12:52:00 PM

I have one thing to say...Ahhhhh.......

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/27/2020 5:19:00 AM

Ah, so delicate and pretty. Your imagery makes me feel lighter.

Jenish Somadas

Date: 6/25/2020 1:39:00 AM

Wonderful flow and imagery.. Great couplets Gershon..

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 6/24/2020 11:20:00 PM

I like the flow of this one, enjoyabe

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/24/2020 11:39:00 PM

TYSM, Timothy. Cheers, Gershon

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 6/24/2020 11:01:00 PM

Really pretty, dreamy and relaxing. It makes me want to lie on the riverbank and watch the scenery. Best of wishes, Evelyn

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/24/2020 11:39:00 PM

Just remember now, Evelyn, when you're on that riverbank: Mask firmly held in place, but don't lose your grip and fall in the H2O!! Then again, that may give you great material for your next spectacular poetic narrative! ~ All Wet

Sam Kauffman

Date: 6/24/2020 10:04:00 PM

Love this - beautiful, peaceful picture, Gershon. So fun to see your expanded horizons! All the best!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/24/2020 11:37:00 PM

Expanding horizons...attaining Krishna consciousness...cosmic revelations forthcoming... Thanks, Sam. ~ SOM (Silly Old Me)