Life's Essentials

What value do I place on love
or the olive branch of a dove
What treasured blessings come thereof
from God above    from God above

What esteem do I give to rain
the source of life it does sustain
nourishing fields of amber grain
in God's domain    in God's domain

How cherished is the risen sun
warming Earth when day has begun
A light like God's begotten Son
The holy One        The holy One

How treasured is a breath of air
The thought of death I cannot bear
I plead with impassioned prayer
And God is there   And God is there

Priceless is life for I've been blessed
by God's spiritual behest 
With belief in His Word expressed
My faith professed   My faith professed

In life these truths are essential
and profoundly existential
for God has been influential
Reverential    Reverential


December 30, 2022
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Villalon Avatar
December 31, 2022 at 4:46 PM
Redeeming... Happy New Year Miss Lin! :)
Koplin Avatar
December 31, 2022 at 6:53 AM
Such a beautiful poem Lin. Wow
Lane Avatar
December 31, 2022 at 7:35 AM
Thanks a bunch for your comments, Sheriff.
Cunningham Avatar
December 31, 2022 at 5:22 AM
A verse of great praise Lin , those repeating lines certainly give it impact. Best of luck in the contest. Tom
Lane Avatar
December 31, 2022 at 7:35 AM
Merci, Monsieur Thomas. I'm so happy you left a thoughtful comment for me.
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