Life's End

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LIFE'S END
So they think you are old and shouldn't live alone, maybe you're too frail to be left on your own Can't manage your own money or live in your own home, apprehensive you give up and take up the tossed bone So many years spent taking care of them, it's your turn they'll tell you and move you right in Deep inside you hope to turn back the time, your life's work was them sure it will be just fine Your full of anticipation life is going to be easier now Soon feeling like a relic lifted up and knocked down You have so many stories memories of days passed, feel like every story told could soon be your last They have no time to listen they heard it all before, tell you they'll talk later as they rush through the door Feeling like a burden wondering what to do, no one seems to care about the trials you've been through To them, you're just repeating things already heard, but if they'd stop to listen your words are not absurd Everyone keeps talking about the day you will die, and who gets what & how your property will divide Not wanting to wait they reach out with dirty hands, to take what's in reach they can't wait for the end You start to feel decrepit and feel your life's a sin, its a bad situation that no one wins in the end You find yourself weaker something isn't right, don't talk to old friends feeling like a fright Every day grows longer you can't wait for the night, no one even gets it it's such a dismal plight You sleep and sleep and sleep to escape reality, your youth is long faded along with vitality Closing your mind eye reaching for your partner's hand, but alone in your bed, this was not the master plan The dream realm is all you see through the haze, you lift your eyes up & meet your lost love's gaze But please don't go too soon to that alternate reality, there are those that still need to hear the words you speak Stop dwelling on real or perceived infirmities or without warning, it will drain your remaining vitality When you think of death or of the dying that they speak, hold your head up high and breathe life into the scene Change your attitude don't die it's not a dream the younger generation you still need to lead Hold onto your life and sow a precious seed, life is worth living don't lose it in a dream

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Date: 5/19/2023 3:23:00 AM
pathetic stage in life. Very nicely written. and the inspiration to the old is a good part of the poem. Best Wishes.
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Date: 5/12/2023 9:16:00 AM
Simply beautiful.
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Sheila Van Zant
Date: 5/17/2023 10:29:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 5/11/2023 6:32:00 AM
I was deeply moved by this poem; for I recently realized that people need to understand my story of how living a lie of frailties keeps you from discovering your truth. I'm completely enamored by this poem.
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Sheila Van Zant
Date: 5/17/2023 10:30:00 PM
I am so glad you liked it. Thank you.
Date: 1/21/2019 4:04:00 PM
I love how real your writings are. Thank you.
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Date: 1/21/2019 4:56:00 PM
No thank you for taking the time to read them and comment on them.
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