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Life's Disguise

So many times Life was such a disguise Good or bad Full of suprise Many people with hidden lies Even salt can look like sugar To the eyes

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Date: 3/22/2017 5:52:00 AM
"Even salt can look like sugar" Very cool, love that analogy of a lie. Very creative.
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Sofia Ra
Date: 3/22/2017 12:04:00 PM
Thank u. So much in life can be a disguise.
Date: 3/21/2017 10:02:00 PM
Sofia, very well written depicting closet skeletons. 7, My best, chuck
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Date: 3/21/2017 7:43:00 PM
Well done Sofia:)
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Sofia Ra
Date: 3/21/2017 8:00:00 PM
Thank you so much

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