Life's Dance

Take my hand in yours
To walk the sands of time
Let's dance to the tunes of life
And waltz away our cares.

We will two and fro
To the beat of the dropping sand
Together we will serenade
Tell the time for us has run out.

7/3/15
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Makama Avatar
October 13, 2015 at 8:48 AM
longest time friend. You've just exhibited to the highest quality exactly what I have missed in here for months. Your lines are so exciting and your words are each having that second hand of drawing me back to them again and again and again irrespective of how many times I have gone through them. Its nice to be home and you are part of the reason I have this refreshing feeling. A definite 7. Cheers!
Austin Avatar
July 30, 2015 at 6:09 PM
Music and the hour glass - two great metaphors for the life dance. Enjoyed. Love, daver
Makama Avatar
July 9, 2015 at 6:46 AM
This is an awesome write. I appreciate the true message of your candid expression.
Dietrich Avatar
July 3, 2015 at 2:11 PM
So nice this is and smooth as a waltz , dearie. how are you today? I am on my last day in Kentucky and glad I found you on here today.
Andresen Avatar
July 3, 2015 at 11:35 AM
- I wish it were possible ..... "dance to the tunes of life .... And waltz away our cares" - A lovely poem, dear Phyllis - (7) - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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