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Life's Confusion

I often sat and wondered Why this superior species suffered And therefore i somehow discovered That through the emotions we harboured We often find ourselves cornered With our hearts in the open, uncovered And found sometimes they differed These few precious moments that we savoured But they left our pride un-honoured While others were left mean tempered Another group just sat and pondered Over the life they had been rendered Some just gave up and surrendered But life continued to be unhampered

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Date: 3/27/2024 7:06:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/7/2016 1:16:00 AM
LAURA, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 9/12/2015 7:52:00 AM
Laura,, awesome write! I enjoyed reading this poem. Skat
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Date: 2/12/2013 1:06:00 AM
salute,,,,
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