Life's Composition

Every morn, I wake to a blank page - 
A canvas, on which I paint
Today

I often revisit past illustrations;
Some statuesque,
and others with rips, tears, and folds;
"Okay" at best
	
Yet as the sun rose Today,
I did not hearken back
nor begin the day’s depiction;
I turned to the future and wondered:
What will be written?

Rather, what will I write?

Forced to ask my reflection
what he wanted in his
Big Picture
I hoped to mimic his vision wholly
Without much stricture

Does he want uniqueness?
With splashes of vivacious colors
to strike society speechless?

Or just a camouflage to hide his weakness?

Maybe he wants a replica;
a proven success.
Tracing another’s outline,
not self-expressed.

He certainly won’t want a still life!
He’s destined to incite change;
That’s how he’ll fulfill life,
and how he’ll fill that page.

Gazing into this mirror -
into my eyes and my mind -
I find a cloud, nothing clearer
No exact path to which I’ll bind.

For I am no omniscient being,
as this blank page can attest...

I want to help.
I want to hope.
To show love to all life
through an optimistic scope.

I am no omniscient being,
as this blank page can attest.
But one thing is definite:
I’ll enjoy life’s quest.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 1/3/2010 7:08:00 PM
Congrats ! great penmanship! Hugs , Robin
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Date: 12/25/2009 9:26:00 PM
Thank you everybody! I really appreciate your comments, and I hope to continue to pen my inspiration :)
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Date: 12/23/2009 3:28:00 AM
Congratulations on being a first round survivor Ryan and the best to you in the finals. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/21/2009 9:32:00 AM
Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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Date: 12/20/2009 11:45:00 AM
Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James
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Date: 11/20/2009 1:11:00 PM
Amazing! Congrats on being featured! keep writing my friend
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Date: 11/20/2009 7:08:00 AM
Congrats on feature poem this week!
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Date: 11/18/2009 5:37:00 PM
Ryan, congratulation on your poem being freatured this week, Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 11/16/2009 11:36:00 AM
Congrats on your feature poem this week! Love Light Patty
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Date: 11/16/2009 10:39:00 AM
Many congratulations on your poem being featured this week >> James
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Date: 11/16/2009 10:38:00 AM
Many congratulations on your poem being featured this week >> James
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Date: 11/16/2009 5:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/15/2009 4:48:00 PM
Just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on having your well written poem featured to my other comment. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 9/1/2009 6:53:00 PM
Lovely and inspiring. We all find ourselves wondering at times what to put on that blank page...I like your resolution to enjoy life's quest :) Katie
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Date: 9/1/2009 4:30:00 PM
Nice Write, Loved It, Always Cherica Lynn <3
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Date: 8/31/2009 2:45:00 PM
Yes for the blank on which to write and the blank page of our life to live that day. Love the thought that went into this one. Sara
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Date: 8/31/2009 12:01:00 PM
This is one writers can surely relate to. Sometimes that dreaded blank page can really loom big. I am by no means a master at haiku--just a beginner trying to find her way. Enjoyed the view in your poem. Thank you for sharing it and for your kind comment. Karen
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Date: 8/31/2009 5:57:00 AM
~~~Splendid~~~ Ryan. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol
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