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Life's Composition

Every morn, I wake to a blank page - A canvas, on which I paint Today I often revisit past illustrations; Some statuesque, and others with rips, tears, and folds; "Okay" at best Yet as the sun rose Today, I did not hearken back nor begin the day’s depiction; I turned to the future and wondered: What will be written? Rather, what will I write? Forced to ask my reflection what he wanted in his Big Picture I hoped to mimic his vision wholly Without much stricture Does he want uniqueness? With splashes of vivacious colors to strike society speechless? Or just a camouflage to hide his weakness? Maybe he wants a replica; a proven success. Tracing another’s outline, not self-expressed. He certainly won’t want a still life! He’s destined to incite change; That’s how he’ll fulfill life, and how he’ll fill that page. Gazing into this mirror - into my eyes and my mind - I find a cloud, nothing clearer No exact path to which I’ll bind. For I am no omniscient being, as this blank page can attest... I want to help. I want to hope. To show love to all life through an optimistic scope. I am no omniscient being, as this blank page can attest. But one thing is definite: I’ll enjoy life’s quest.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/3/2010 7:08:00 PM
Congrats ! great penmanship! Hugs , Robin
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Date: 12/25/2009 9:26:00 PM
Thank you everybody! I really appreciate your comments, and I hope to continue to pen my inspiration :)
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Date: 12/23/2009 3:28:00 AM
Congratulations on being a first round survivor Ryan and the best to you in the finals. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/21/2009 9:32:00 AM
Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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Date: 12/20/2009 11:45:00 AM
Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James
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Date: 11/20/2009 1:11:00 PM
Amazing! Congrats on being featured! keep writing my friend
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Date: 11/20/2009 7:08:00 AM
Congrats on feature poem this week!
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Date: 11/18/2009 5:37:00 PM
Ryan, congratulation on your poem being freatured this week, Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 11/16/2009 11:36:00 AM
Congrats on your feature poem this week! Love Light Patty
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Date: 11/16/2009 10:39:00 AM
Many congratulations on your poem being featured this week >> James
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Date: 11/16/2009 10:38:00 AM
Many congratulations on your poem being featured this week >> James
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Date: 11/16/2009 5:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/15/2009 4:48:00 PM
Just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on having your well written poem featured to my other comment. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 9/1/2009 6:53:00 PM
Lovely and inspiring. We all find ourselves wondering at times what to put on that blank page...I like your resolution to enjoy life's quest :) Katie
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Date: 9/1/2009 4:30:00 PM
Nice Write, Loved It, Always Cherica Lynn <3
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Date: 8/31/2009 2:45:00 PM
Yes for the blank on which to write and the blank page of our life to live that day. Love the thought that went into this one. Sara
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Date: 8/31/2009 12:01:00 PM
This is one writers can surely relate to. Sometimes that dreaded blank page can really loom big. I am by no means a master at haiku--just a beginner trying to find her way. Enjoyed the view in your poem. Thank you for sharing it and for your kind comment. Karen
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Date: 8/31/2009 5:57:00 AM
~~~Splendid~~~ Ryan. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol
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