Lifelong Journey

The clouds in the sky
Pouring droplets as we walk by
Couldn't we just comprehend guy
What is it that drives us by

Down,down,down
Drown,drown,drown
I'm fast sinking in the ocean's lawn
Couldn't help but fell to the ground
In the ocean of loves crown

Couldn't you feel my impression
Or you just see my distortion
Have a feel at my emotion
In the ocean of loves in motion

You and I walking this distant life
Just trying to understand it's dice
The great nature of this land undispice
For you,for me,for us,to pay the price

Yet it seems so far
You and me a distant bar
Couldn't we do it at par
So that we could be a little star

And be a little bit wiser
So that life could be a little bit better
Don't want to be a trendsetter
But just want a tranquil life that's greater

What is it that triggers our insanity
Could we cool it off to have a longevity
Just to be a little bit in vanity
For you,for me, for us, to see it's rarity
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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November 3, 2024 at 6:19 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 26, 2016 at 6:09 PM
zainal hamidon, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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January 4, 2016 at 2:37 PM
ZAINAL, enjoyed reading your poem. Hugs **SKAT**
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