Lifelines

A misty  reflection
in the mirror
of life


a fragile shadow
on the wall
of boundaries


A deep echo
in the tunnel
of thoughts

A  soft whisper
in the voice
of dreams


a broken emotion
in the beat
of Hearts

a flash back
in nightmares
of death

a roller coaster
in the subconscious
of minds


a thunder storm
in the dilhema
of soul

a water mark
in the shade
of light

an immersion of words
in the baptism
of truth

an ultraviolet ray
in a shattered prism
of glass

a moonless sky
in a presumption
of total eclipse

a tempting apple
in the garden
of forbidness

a white angel
in the purity
of lusty sin

an ardent paramour
in fervent yearning
of passion

a jealous lover
in the destruction
of love

a stop watch 
in the moment
of time

a deep crack
in the crust
of the  world

an earthquake
in the hot core
of  lava

a forest path
in a jungle
of lions


a gold circle
in waterfalls
of a crazy affair


a wave of trust
in the vast ocean
of betrayal

a soften glacier 
on the bedrock
of seperation

a chess game
in the loss
of forever


a weeping petal
of a wild daisy
in last goodbye


a big question mark
on the edge
of destiny.


(3rd May 2010)
Charma
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Bien Avatar
May 16, 2010 at 7:23 AM
Fantastic write! JB
Jennings Avatar
May 11, 2010 at 11:56 PM
"a weeping petal of a wild daisy in last goodbye... " this makes me weep for all the goodbyes of my loved ones
Orozco Avatar
May 8, 2010 at 9:02 AM
beautiful write!!
Anderson Avatar
May 6, 2010 at 8:16 AM
Hey Charma, Thnx for the comments on my writes..I appreciate them ..Jimmy
Gumbo Avatar
May 5, 2010 at 6:54 AM
Brilliant writing my friend! It's always a pleasure to read you dear Charma :)
A   Avatar
May 5, 2010 at 2:34 AM
Charma excellent, they are always a pleasure to read, i love the ending on this . you can make a lot on the ending,..p.d.
Dietrich Avatar
May 4, 2010 at 7:21 AM
HI, Charma, I miss chatting lately too. So busy. I woke up super early to prepare mother day things to mail and still have only a little time for my soup comments. This post of yours really is nice.Some of these are quite profound. What made you decide to write this? It's very reflective. I enjoyed seeing these. LUv, andrea
Byrne Avatar
May 3, 2010 at 9:33 PM
pearls of wisdom and observation!
Mehta Avatar
May 3, 2010 at 5:42 PM
It's my fav. Wonderful expressions. I love it
Sweetheart Avatar
May 3, 2010 at 2:51 PM
Well every verse/stanza/line has super meaning for me as well.. only the competition is Ron himself.. he fights him.. this is awesome.. a new fav of course.. and a deeply touching and though provoking write today... what are we both to do? I saw the comment about your Mom being named Maria also... but this is a great sign to me... maybe one day Italy in the future.. ...with luv.. from the "Sweetheart"
A  Avatar
May 3, 2010 at 2:47 PM
Charma U R beyond my read, I loved the one you have on( Karma), the one about your bold hubby. Now enjoyed this one more. Always a pleasure to read your poetry,,IRMA
Devonshire Avatar
May 3, 2010 at 11:19 AM
Very nice, Charma!! I especially love the truth in the verse about the "chess game." That's what love seems to be sometimes. Great work! The meter and flow keep the poem moving at a pulse-pounding rate of passion. Love, Carolyn
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