Life..Is It?

Looking though
the looking- glass
peering, wondering
when will this end?
Duplicates swirling without hindering
my imagination
the colors, fox trotting
across my eyes
When the mountains laugh
their belated laugh
and when the birds cry
their distressing warbles
will the looking- glass mystery
ever
end?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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March 13, 2009 at 12:29 AM
Congratulations on your lovely poetry being featured this week. GB Tyesha
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March 11, 2009 at 11:10 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)
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March 11, 2009 at 9:14 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week. God Bless Phyl
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March 11, 2009 at 8:07 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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March 11, 2009 at 7:48 AM
Very beautiful write, thought provoking and mystical, I really liked it, also the way it leaves you with a question at the end. Congrats on your feature this week! :) Love, Amy
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March 11, 2009 at 7:06 AM
Congrats Shiki on your poem "Life..is is?" being featured this week. Vince
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March 9, 2009 at 5:56 PM
Much to think about in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Nice use of imagery. Keep on writing! Karen
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March 9, 2009 at 4:22 PM
Thought provoking write here, Shiki. Love the line re. imagination "fox trotting across my eyes" ... great words!! Good choice to be a feature here at the Soup this week! Congratulations!
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March 9, 2009 at 11:07 AM
Shiki - Congratulations on your poem being featured this week! Very well deserved. Peace always, John
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March 9, 2009 at 6:24 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar
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March 8, 2009 at 9:46 PM
Shiki - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
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