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Lifeblood Denied

Cracked California, Sky has teased her, too long. Her thirst, it lingers As clouds withhold her water; Her parched throat cries for mercy.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/10/2018 11:13:00 AM
- Powerful lines, M.L. ... well done - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/10/2018 10:29:00 AM
Superb Tanka reflecting harsh reality dearest, M.L. Kiser!
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Date: 7/9/2018 6:07:00 PM
Nice Tanka, ML!
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Date: 7/9/2018 1:44:00 PM
Amazing personification ML. She does need rain desperately.
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Date: 7/9/2018 11:37:00 AM
Hope it rains soon there..fire hazard is growing..very apt theme, MLK.
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