Life Without You

Life without you, Pangs me deep inside. I can’t find time to sleep, As all my thoughts collide. I'm drowning in your absence, Sinking in the sea of regret. I can’t find the right words, Without making myself upset. Life without you, Leaves me upside down. I’m constantly thinking of you, As my sadness piles in mounds. Regret is getting heavy, For my shoulders to bear. I am sorry for my actions, And for treating you unfair. Life without you, Will never been the same. It took one minute to hurt you, But I’ve spend years with the pain. My soul has the scars, Of all that I’ve been through. Life is not the same, Living it...without you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Guzzi Avatar
June 9, 2010 at 1:32 PM
Such atouchy write. I drowning in your absence...you want I'm....or just drowning...Light & Love
Culverhouse Avatar
May 18, 2010 at 8:28 AM
yes stupid mistakes tend to haunt, when not forgiven. nicely penned!!
Richards Avatar
May 18, 2010 at 7:40 AM
Deeply heartfelt....."sadness piles in mounds"....wow...you write such profoundly emotional words........
Chircop Avatar
May 18, 2010 at 5:51 AM
This is'sad','deep','emotive',Regrets,Who doesn't have any?memories,questions,guilt,pain,absence wrenching our hearts. .a poem full of trapped feelings,'We can never change the past,but we can always make a great present and a better future'. .Great work,Raul. .Charma
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