Life Wish

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The world is brimming with breathtaking beauty. The juncture of the cliffs and the sea. The waves pound the shore ceaselessly. What they're muttering is a mystery for me. I see the water and the sky dissolving intimately. As I get older, I wish I could live here in perpetuity. Written: July 8, 2021 Bite Size Poem No11 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Line Gauthier

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/13/2021 1:18:00 PM

Congratulation on your win. What a "Beautiful" write and picture. Wish I was there. Have a blessed day writing away............

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 7/10/2021 5:30:00 AM

Harmony in perpetuity is a wonderful construct. nicely done....

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/9/2021 3:58:00 AM

Usually words like this " perpetuity" irritate me. Not in this case, in this poem, it is lovely. Great imagery!

Buhagiar Victor

Date: 7/8/2021 5:49:00 AM

Incredibly beautiful with a hard lesson that one day we must all go. Oh to be at peace in the place you so astoundingly described. Well done.

Sotto Poet
Date: 7/8/2021 6:13:00 AM

Your appreciation as a great talented poet is so valuable for me, dear Victor. Thanks for your kind words and wishes, and I wish you to be always in peace and harmony wherever you want to be.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/8/2021 5:11:00 AM

Beautiful scenery in your photo as in your poem, Lasaad.

Sotto Poet
Date: 7/8/2021 6:14:00 AM

Thank you so much, Vijay, I'm glad you like it. Have a wonderful day, peace and love