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Life Wish

The world is brimming with breathtaking beauty. The juncture of the cliffs and the sea. The waves pound the shore ceaselessly. What they're muttering is a mystery for me. I see the water and the sky dissolving intimately. As I get older, I wish I could live here in perpetuity.
Written: July 8, 2021 Bite Size Poem No11 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Line Gauthier
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Goldsmith Avatar
July 13, 2021 at 1:18 PM
Congratulation on your win. What a "Beautiful" write and picture. Wish I was there. Have a blessed day writing away............
Skelly Avatar
July 10, 2021 at 5:30 AM
Harmony in perpetuity is a wonderful construct. nicely done....
Krutsinger Avatar
July 9, 2021 at 3:58 AM
Usually words like this " perpetuity" irritate me. Not in this case, in this poem, it is lovely. Great imagery!
Buhagiar Avatar
July 8, 2021 at 5:49 AM
Incredibly beautiful with a hard lesson that one day we must all go. Oh to be at peace in the place you so astoundingly described. Well done.
Poet Avatar
July 8, 2021 at 6:13 AM
Your appreciation as a great talented poet is so valuable for me, dear Victor. Thanks for your kind words and wishes, and I wish you to be always in peace and harmony wherever you want to be.
Pandit Avatar
July 8, 2021 at 5:11 AM
Beautiful scenery in your photo as in your poem, Lasaad.
Poet Avatar
July 8, 2021 at 6:14 AM
Thank you so much, Vijay, I'm glad you like it. Have a wonderful day, peace and love
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