Life Water

Life water
wash me down
simple moments water rushing
over winter white feet
tumbled rocks purple catches me
waiting.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Mehta Avatar
June 8, 2011 at 7:17 AM
Lovely expressions onn the water of life with nice images, Veronica
Joseph Avatar
June 8, 2011 at 1:24 PM
thank you !
Guzzi Avatar
June 7, 2011 at 5:22 PM
nice birth refferances! Light & Love
Joseph Avatar
June 8, 2011 at 1:24 PM
only stream references, no birth references intended.
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