Life Was Loving

In the solitude 
of a winter evening
the lean river flawed gently
through the countryside
hushed beneath the sky.

At its bank
away from life I stood,
tracing the past
and looking to our lives
with love.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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December 20, 2024 at 10:57 PM
Away from the days in life filled with quarrels,enmity, etc the poet on the bank of a lean river in solitude compared its flow with the journey of life and now in that solitude he thinks insite of the quarrels,and enmities lives looked away from solitude is loving.
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