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Life Verses Death

Life can be compared to a cunning fox, We often need to cogitate out of box; Showcasing our cleverness. Death can be compared to gloomy songs, We need to surrender as the time bongs; Accepting with braveness. Life and death are non-identical entities, We need to agnize, there aren't immortalities; Relenting sheer earnestness. 28-5-2020 ~DEEPA~ Third place in the contest. Note:Triple Stanza Couplet Tail-Rhyme Poetry Contest Sponsor:Charles Messina

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Aditi Mishra

Date: 7/7/2020 4:42:00 AM

Thoughtful muse Deepa. The analogies of life and death you've taken are real. Congratulations on your win. Much love :)

V. Deepa
Date: 7/8/2020 3:18:00 PM

Aww dear Aditi mam, To be frank..most of the times until and unless I get a Congratulations comment,I don't realise that my poem has been placed or won. Now it's only because of you I am aware of this win.Thankyou for spending your precious time reading my poems too.I am glad you liked it.:-) Take care.Much love~Deepa:-)