Life Through the Passenger Seat

When you are not on your steering wheel
You never know where your journey will  take you in
Things running backwards, but the visions consumed better while you are still

You feel more clarity through the way that you have always been
Visions are pampering you through their beauty in capture
You never know where your journey will  take you in

Your visions dancing wild from east to west combining in perfect mixture
They provide some adventures behind your fantasy 
Visions are pampering you through their beauty in capture

We used to live as the driver of our gravity
Hypnotized by the tracing line road which led you to nowhere but fate
They provide some adventures behind your fantasy 

Sitting on the passenger seat sometimes puts you on assorted way to rate
The life which driven sometimes missed from your visibility
Hypnotized by the tracing line road which led you to nowhere but fate
 
A passenger seat may help you to find the patch of your stained cavity
The life which driven sometimes missed from your visibility
When you are not on your steering wheel
Things running backwards, but the visions consumed better while you are still

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 1/13/2013 11:13:00 PM
Way to go Yanny, you have given us all an opportunity to be the passenger on this poetic journey.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/13/2013 11:38:00 PM
Nice to haveuou in the pessager seat Richard :D wishing you a great day :)
Date: 1/13/2013 8:44:00 PM
I like the analogy of this poem. Nicely written and I enjoyed reading.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/13/2013 11:38:00 PM
Thank iyou Debra your visits also enrich my days :)
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