Life, The endless journey

Yes, you can see the sky 
        When you alive. 
You sees the colours of sky that 
 may, reminds of the chapter of life. 
      Sometimes you are sad and cry!  
     And it rains from the sky. Please!!  
Notice, sky not may beautiful by it’s won 
            So.. Why your life would be cool without deeds? 
Ofcourse, it has no end. But you have! 
Decorate your life as the sky does with clouds,sunlight, birds..   If sky tolerate  the pollution, thunders..  Why can't you? 
Anything you do, but at last..  
                      You will be a little star of Nights sky.
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September 7, 2025 at 7:29 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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