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Life Teaches. In remorse,I can feel the spasms, of the uncouth experience, this world has cast on me. These unstiched patches have drawn me to more kindness. Spontaneously,words drop like milk and honey, so that this world is a sweeter place to live in. Quote Prompt- "How is it so easy to be kind to people"? he asked....Milk and honey dripped from my lips and I answered"cause people have not been kind to me..."-Rupi Kaur. Contest:Quote Prompt 1...Free Verse. Sponsor:Laura Loo. 11/11/2016

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Date: 11/19/2016 8:28:00 AM
Such a beautiful message you present in your lovely, well-written poem, Riswanna. Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra
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Rizwana Bhurani
Date: 11/20/2016 7:42:00 AM
Thank you.... regards
Date: 11/19/2016 12:05:00 AM
This one is awesome, Rizwana:) congratulations on your win:) a 7 from me:)
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Date: 11/20/2016 7:42:00 AM
Thank you... Regards
Date: 11/18/2016 5:33:00 PM
this is wonderful, Rizwana!
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Rizwana Bhurani
Date: 11/20/2016 7:43:00 AM
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Date: 11/18/2016 11:47:00 AM
Your words are making me the feel the the dripping kindness...loved it! Congrats on your super win dear Rizwana! EXCELLENT!//love, Anu:)
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Rizwana Bhurani
Date: 11/20/2016 7:43:00 AM
Thank you... regards
Date: 11/18/2016 9:52:00 AM
Oh Rizwana, beautiful poem! thank you and congrats :) -luloo
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Rizwana Bhurani
Date: 11/20/2016 7:44:00 AM
Pleasure to be a part of your contest ....thank you... regards
Date: 11/13/2016 6:47:00 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it
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Rizwana Bhurani
Date: 11/13/2016 8:03:00 AM
Thanks.... regards
Date: 11/11/2016 3:45:00 PM
Good response! It surely fits ... CayCay
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Date: 11/11/2016 9:57:00 AM
Thanks.........regards
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Date: 11/11/2016 7:23:00 AM
Excellent. Good luck in the contest.
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Rizwana Bhurani
Date: 11/13/2016 7:44:00 AM
Thanks..regards

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