Rizwana Bhurani Poet Free verse

Life Teaches

Life Teaches.

In remorse,I can feel the spasms,
of the uncouth experience,
this world has cast on me.
These unstiched patches have 
drawn me to more kindness.
Spontaneously,words drop like milk and honey,
so that this world is a sweeter place to live in.



Quote Prompt- "How is it so easy to be kind to people"? he asked....Milk and honey dripped from my lips and I answered"cause people have not been kind to me..."-Rupi Kaur.


Contest:Quote Prompt 1...Free Verse.
Sponsor:Laura Loo.
11/11/2016

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Sandra Haight November 19, 2016 at 8:28 AM Such a beautiful message you present in your lovely, well-written poem, Riswanna. Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra Rizwana Bhurani November 20, 2016 at 7:42 AM Thank you.... regards

Joanna Daniel November 19, 2016 at 12:05 AM This one is awesome, Rizwana:) congratulations on your win:) a 7 from me:) Rizwana Bhurani November 20, 2016 at 7:42 AM Thank you... Regards

Andrea Dietrich November 18, 2016 at 5:33 PM this is wonderful, Rizwana! Rizwana Bhurani November 20, 2016 at 7:43 AM Thank you..... regards

Anu Nayak November 18, 2016 at 11:47 AM Your words are making me the feel the the dripping kindness...loved it! Congrats on your super win dear Rizwana! EXCELLENT!//love, Anu:) Rizwana Bhurani November 20, 2016 at 7:43 AM Thank you... regards

Beautiful Scars November 18, 2016 at 9:52 AM Oh Rizwana, beautiful poem! thank you and congrats :) -luloo Rizwana Bhurani November 20, 2016 at 7:44 AM Pleasure to be a part of your contest ....thank you... regards

Ravi Sathasivam November 13, 2016 at 6:47 AM Excellent. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it Rizwana Bhurani November 13, 2016 at 8:03 AM Thanks.... regards

CayCay Godwin November 11, 2016 at 3:45 PM Good response! It surely fits ... CayCay

Rizwana Bhurani November 11, 2016 at 9:57 AM Thanks.........regards

Phil Capitano November 11, 2016 at 7:23 AM Excellent. Good luck in the contest. Rizwana Bhurani November 13, 2016 at 7:44 AM Thanks..regards