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Where sky meets ocean and air meets water, and these two approach land, a novice surfer glides ever sideways along the borderline between the graceful, smooth glass of intention, and the turbulent, chaotic crash of execution. This eternal moment is called life. In love, it is called marriage or fatherhood.

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Date: 4/28/2025 12:11:00 PM
What a Lovely "Life Surfing" write. I enjoyed reading this one. Great Ending... "Good Luck" Have a wonderful spring day.........
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David Crandall
Date: 4/28/2025 12:58:00 PM
Thanks Paula - glad you liked it!

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