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Life Surfing

Where sky meets ocean and air meets water,
and these two approach land,
a novice surfer 
glides ever sideways along the borderline
between the graceful, smooth glass of intention,
and the turbulent, chaotic crash of execution.
This eternal moment is called life.
In love, it is called marriage or fatherhood.
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Goldsmith Avatar
April 28, 2025 at 12:11 PM
What a Lovely "Life Surfing" write. I enjoyed reading this one. Great Ending... "Good Luck" Have a wonderful spring day.........
Crandall Avatar
April 28, 2025 at 12:58 PM
Thanks Paula - glad you liked it!
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