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Life Sails With Deceptive Pretensions

Sadness is betimes masked by pretence, And made to believe that "I am fine". Anger is disguised by fake smiles, assuring that "Everything is all right". Envy is engrossed with curses always but, externally wishing others "Best of luck". Emotions are dismally manipulated according to circumstances. 22-6-2020 Note: It's Only Make believe poetry Contest Sponsored by Regina Riddle.

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Date: 6/24/2020 3:42:00 PM
Nice penning Deepa, good imagery and insight too. Blessings, Gordon
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V. Deepa
Date: 6/25/2020 1:32:00 PM
Hello sir, Thanks for stopping by and glancing at my work:-) And Thankyou very much for your generous appreciation and blessings.:-) Best wishes for your works too.Keep writing.Keep inspiring. Take care.Warm regards~Deepa
Date: 6/22/2020 3:03:00 PM
Hello Deepa, yes life is all these things. Enjoy your day my friend. Love Darlene your friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/23/2020 3:22:00 PM
Hello Deepa, I hope that you have slept well. Things will change it can not remain like this too much longer. Enjoy your day my friend. love Darlene
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V. Deepa
Date: 6/22/2020 3:10:00 PM
Hello Darlene mam, Yes mam life is unpredictable. Thankyou.:-) I finish enjoying my day mam.Had a rainy day.Now it's midnight here. Must sleep now. You have a great day.:-) Take care.Much love.~Deepa
Date: 6/22/2020 11:45:00 AM
Each and every line is heartening and thrills me. Loved it !!
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V. Deepa
Date: 6/22/2020 12:08:00 PM
Hai, Thanks a bunch for your visit & compliment.I am glad to know that you loved my muse.:-) Best wishes. Take care.Warm regards~Deepa:-)

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