Life Sabotage

I am the muteness behind naivete
Born as the duplication of despair, flunked
A demented soul
An impaired self of bureaucracy

Jaded at the tip of shadow
Above it stood the gray
Quietly stabbed the main arterial venous of the real life chemistry
Sneaking low to a shallow sac of each personal sense

Like a deadly poison, odorless nor tasteless
The fall gradually buried in faint

Dejected
Lonesome
Lost images, abstained lite
Living as the reality of achromatic which yet spurred

Speaking of the colorless 

Speak to the life with no magic

The life which got sucked by the spell of affliction
Beneath the autism of a blur
Life decayed when the magic got sealed
Illumination shriek within the cavity of its dull voice

Speaking of the somber

Speak to the life with no magic


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                                               Honorable Mention
                                Life with no magic Free Poetry Contest 
                                             Sponsor Sandy Ivy D
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 15, 2012 at 4:42 AM
Congratulations on your winning spot Yanny love xx
Dietrich Avatar
December 15, 2012 at 12:28 AM
I see you worked hard on this poem, yanny. congrats on your win. you very well created the mood of the contest idea.
Widjanarko Avatar
December 15, 2012 at 12:50 AM
Hey Andrea, I've tried my best in here :D, thank you for your supports through my poetry :D - hug, Yanny
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December 14, 2012 at 8:43 PM
Yanny, Congratulations with your lovely deep win enjoyed the imagery. Goodnight :-) LINDA
Widjanarko Avatar
December 15, 2012 at 12:47 AM
Thanks Linda it's really pleasure to know that you enjoyed it as well :D - hug, Yanny
Ivy D Avatar
December 14, 2012 at 6:43 PM
thank you' Sandy
Widjanarko Avatar
December 14, 2012 at 10:20 PM
Thanks Sandy, your contest is really inspired me :D
Guzzi Avatar
December 9, 2012 at 8:00 AM
Oh I love this fav line [Born as the duplication of despair] Light & Love
Widjanarko Avatar
December 14, 2012 at 10:19 PM
That's my fav line too :D
Michelle Avatar
December 8, 2012 at 10:11 PM
beautiful piece you've written! this is the first i have read of you and i love it! hope to read more. such thoughts you express... -JuliMichelle
Widjanarko Avatar
December 14, 2012 at 10:18 PM
Thanks Jull, your present is really uplifting :D
Falotico Avatar
December 8, 2012 at 11:12 AM
Beautifully written and expressed.. hugs Michael
Widjanarko Avatar
December 14, 2012 at 10:15 PM
Thanks Michael, happy holiday :D
Carrillo Avatar
December 7, 2012 at 9:44 PM
This is very good and I wish you luck in the contest. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
Widjanarko Avatar
December 7, 2012 at 10:01 PM
Thank's Luci, your visit is really uplifting :)
Lamoureux Avatar
December 7, 2012 at 6:57 PM
Well done Yanny, I really like this poem, you have captured the sadness and emotion. I am pleased I am the first to comment. Good luck in the contest.
Widjanarko Avatar
December 7, 2012 at 9:48 PM
Thank you, Richard, i'm glad that you like it :D
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