Life Sabotage

I am the muteness behind naivete
Born as the duplication of despair, flunked
A demented soul
An impaired self of bureaucracy

Jaded at the tip of shadow
Above it stood the gray
Quietly stabbed the main arterial venous of the real life chemistry
Sneaking low to a shallow sac of each personal sense

Like a deadly poison, odorless nor tasteless
The fall gradually buried in faint

Dejected
Lonesome
Lost images, abstained lite
Living as the reality of achromatic which yet spurred

Speaking of the colorless 

Speak to the life with no magic

The life which got sucked by the spell of affliction
Beneath the autism of a blur
Life decayed when the magic got sealed
Illumination shriek within the cavity of its dull voice

Speaking of the somber

Speak to the life with no magic


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                                               Honorable Mention
                                Life with no magic Free Poetry Contest 
                                             Sponsor Sandy Ivy D

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 12/15/2012 4:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning spot Yanny love xx
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Date: 12/15/2012 12:28:00 AM
I see you worked hard on this poem, yanny. congrats on your win. you very well created the mood of the contest idea.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 12/15/2012 12:50:00 AM
Hey Andrea, I've tried my best in here :D, thank you for your supports through my poetry :D - hug, Yanny
Date: 12/14/2012 8:43:00 PM
Yanny, Congratulations with your lovely deep win enjoyed the imagery. Goodnight :-) LINDA
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 12/15/2012 12:47:00 AM
Thanks Linda it's really pleasure to know that you enjoyed it as well :D - hug, Yanny
Date: 12/14/2012 6:43:00 PM
thank you' Sandy
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 12/14/2012 10:20:00 PM
Thanks Sandy, your contest is really inspired me :D
Date: 12/9/2012 8:00:00 AM
Oh I love this fav line [Born as the duplication of despair] Light & Love
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 12/14/2012 10:19:00 PM
That's my fav line too :D
Date: 12/8/2012 10:11:00 PM
beautiful piece you've written! this is the first i have read of you and i love it! hope to read more. such thoughts you express... -JuliMichelle
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 12/14/2012 10:18:00 PM
Thanks Jull, your present is really uplifting :D
Date: 12/8/2012 11:12:00 AM
Beautifully written and expressed.. hugs Michael
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 12/14/2012 10:15:00 PM
Thanks Michael, happy holiday :D
Date: 12/7/2012 9:44:00 PM
This is very good and I wish you luck in the contest. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 12/7/2012 10:01:00 PM
Thank's Luci, your visit is really uplifting :)
Date: 12/7/2012 6:57:00 PM
Well done Yanny, I really like this poem, you have captured the sadness and emotion. I am pleased I am the first to comment. Good luck in the contest.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 12/7/2012 9:48:00 PM
Thank you, Richard, i'm glad that you like it :D
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