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Life Readings Death Speaking

life readings body leaking odor reeking death speaking mistakes riddled with teachings star reaching foreseeing far seeking outer space intelligent beings come close and listen my soul is cosmic car driven get my meaning you feel me hot freezing cold heating been busted cheating really dude how rude you deserve a attitude beating altitude feeling god peeking dog peeping what the f... is this guy thinking rhyming with no apparent reason perhaps it's the changing of the seasons like playing poker with drunk derelict demons I just talk with poetic freedom and a little bit of walking wisdom the rest is pure stand still nonsense

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Date: 12/21/2014 7:21:00 AM
Lol. Thats funny. I like the ending there, a little bit of walking wisdom, the rest is pure nonsense. I think there is a lot more in your poems than what is said, I love em!
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Sebastian Aaron Baez
Date: 12/21/2014 7:26:00 AM
:) I add that last second right before posting. Funny how things just pop in my head like that.
Date: 12/21/2014 7:15:00 AM
Good rhyme, good poem...
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Sebastian Aaron Baez
Date: 12/21/2014 7:23:00 AM
Thank you Lucky! And thanks for stopping by.

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