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Life Readings Death Speaking

life readings
body leaking
odor reeking
death speaking
mistakes riddled with teachings
star reaching
foreseeing
far seeking
outer space intelligent beings
come close and listen
my soul is cosmic car driven
get my meaning
you feel me
hot freezing
cold heating
been busted cheating
really dude
how rude
you deserve a attitude beating
altitude feeling
god peeking
dog peeping
what the f... is this guy thinking
rhyming with no apparent reason
perhaps it's the changing of the seasons
like playing poker
with drunk derelict demons
I just talk with poetic freedom
and a little bit of walking wisdom
the rest is pure stand still nonsense

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/21/2014 7:21:00 AM
Lol. Thats funny. I like the ending there, a little bit of walking wisdom, the rest is pure nonsense. I think there is a lot more in your poems than what is said, I love em!
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Sebastian Aaron Baez
Date: 12/21/2014 7:26:00 AM
:) I add that last second right before posting. Funny how things just pop in my head like that.
Date: 12/21/2014 7:15:00 AM
Good rhyme, good poem...
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Sebastian Aaron Baez
Date: 12/21/2014 7:23:00 AM
Thank you Lucky! And thanks for stopping by.

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