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Life Raft

She lies in the water Breaths in and gracefully floats Implants are great © 2000

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/7/2010 12:05:00 AM
you know a girl work got those, all us girls got a free feel, it's so weird! but interesting to grab, like a stress ball XD
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Date: 8/6/2010 6:21:00 AM
Sidney---you like bodily functions don't ya? funny!
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Date: 8/5/2010 8:34:00 PM
Very nice haiku with apt images, Sidney
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Date: 8/5/2010 8:20:00 PM
Wonderful Sidney, your vision sounds as if she got your eyes all on her. Enjoyed your Haiku, ..p.d.
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Date: 8/5/2010 8:04:00 PM
OH NO ..yet another fun filled Haiku from u.. this time implants... where do u get them so fine Sidney? so fun.. with luv..
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