Life R1

Life- Randomling 1



Logic of life I could not decipher,
Vivid thoughts turned me hyper,
Driven deep in a whirlpool,
I might be the biggest fool !
 




Written Sept 2nd, 2015
For contest by Mary
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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September 2, 2015 at 10:15 AM
If that's the case were all fools. Lol. We all react to a stimuli. Sometimes we react with anger and Logic looses to emotion. Loved this write. Very true. Then there is forgiveness and that's another topic...
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September 2, 2015 at 5:22 AM
Wonderfully done , Dr. Upma. Accepting ignorance is a sign of wisdom. Some hours before I wrote something along the same lines.
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September 2, 2015 at 5:36 AM
Thnx Demetrios my dear friend, I shall Hv to check out yours !!
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