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Life Passes By

dark green lotus leaves soft throne of the old bullfrog life passes by 04/10/2011 By- Tahera Mannan Theme-Lily pads and frogs.

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Lillie Williams

Date: 1/25/2013 7:12:00 PM

This is good, very good.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/22/2012 8:55:00 PM

This is outstanding. One of the best! Congrats on your win.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/21/2012 7:21:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Sidney~LeeAnn's "Lilly-pads and Frogs" contest Tahera. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/21/2012 12:23:00 AM

Tahera,, congrats with your wonderful froggy win.. enjoyed reading your poem tonight~xox~PD

David Williams

Date: 5/20/2012 3:55:00 AM

Tahera congrats on your win..David

Skat A

Date: 5/20/2012 2:50:00 AM

TAHERA, Congratulations;-) & Thanks for supporting my contest~ :-)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/18/2012 10:05:00 PM

I still remember this one. Love it still

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/25/2011 10:43:00 PM

Tahera,awonderful haiku, thank you for sharing.. May the magic of writing fill your days here on the soup. May all your dreams come true this holiday season. I hope you are enjoying the blessings that Christmas brings.. filling our hearts with hope and joy, just take care of yourself... once again enjoyed your poem,,always,..p.d.

James Fraser

Date: 11/13/2011 10:31:00 AM

When one looks at frogs, they do appear just to be passing the time of day. Fine Haiku Tahera < I'm fine by the way, thank you kindly for asking > :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/2/2011 10:23:00 PM

been awhile hon!... a shining ku with good use of the consonance L... love the turn of the last line... winning's bet, tahera! :) huggs!

Kash Poet

Date: 11/2/2011 6:31:00 AM

Beautiful haiku...have you left the soup Tahera?

Charles Henderson

Date: 10/27/2011 6:05:00 PM

green lotus leaves/ the throne of an old bullfrog/ time passes/// I think I would link line 1 and 2 and change your line 3 which is a mental construct, rather than a sensory perception. Excellant observation.