Life Opening Up

When life begins to open up
Relieving you of all tribulations
Blood circulating in free zone
Like rivers at night
Doing it with affection
As they feed oceans without complain
From spring to summer, autumn to winter,
Taking along all love messages day and night
To make the ocean great city of compassion
That preserves all good memories,
Throwing bad ones to the oceanfront

When life begins to open up
Lighting up the self in you
And rejuvenate mysteries of ancient times
That washed emptiness in people
To make the journey pleasant adventure
Like in the Garden of Eden,
When nature gave birth to beauty and hapiness

When life begins to open up
Encircling you with guardian Angels
To halt every intruder,
For you to find peace in your kingdom,
Like creatures living on the ocean floor
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Kendrick Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 5:55 AM
"When life begins to open up Encircling you with guardian Angels To halt every intruder, For you to find peace in your kingdom"..I especially enjoyed these lines..If a person is born again they come into the kingdom and are heirs and joint heirs with Christ..Sara
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September 11, 2014 at 6:50 AM
Thank you Sara for your wonderful comment... Lekau
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July 23, 2014 at 1:36 AM
Greetings Lekau, An outstanding poem... Imagery is magnificent. Well done! Verlena
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July 23, 2014 at 1:48 AM
Hi Verlena, Thank your for your wonderful comment, I appreciate it,... Lekau
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July 23, 2014 at 1:43 AM
Hi Theresa, Thank you for your wonderful and inspiring comment on my poem, I appreciate it... Lekau
Stephens Avatar
July 22, 2014 at 7:55 AM
Hi Lekau, A wonderful poem. You have an insightful mind that creates imaginative imagery. Well done, Theresa xx
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July 23, 2014 at 1:51 AM
Hi Theresa, Thank you for wonderful and inspiring comment on my poem, I appreciate it... Lekau
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