Life Oozes

Written by Gail DeBole 
on December 13, 2012


Thrust onto the ground -
Woven miracle of twigs;
The spilled egg cracks.

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Susan Ashley

October 13, 2017 at 8:50 PM

A lovely haiku Gail. Great imagery and title. Enjoyed!

Karl Marszalowicz

May 8, 2013 at 4:23 AM

expand, expand, a good shorty like this makes you curious but then I think you should follow it up.

Harry Horsman

February 5, 2013 at 1:32 AM

amazing Haiku..

Andrea Dietrich

January 27, 2013 at 4:29 PM

great title for this! an interesting haiku theme.

Poet Destroyer A

December 28, 2012 at 3:49 PM

Gail, not a good fall... but a goof haiku,,, always...pd

Bidyut Bikash Brahma

December 27, 2012 at 2:57 PM

nice haiku

Anne-Lise Andresen

December 27, 2012 at 2:17 PM

The year 2012 is almost over. - I thank you for all the nice poem you have shared with me, and that you have taken the time to read and comments my poems. - Always pleasant, I appreciate your visit. - I have enjoyed a lot here at P-Soup and made many good friends. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)