Life On the Verge

Like a candle that is slowly melting
With the wind its flame is flickering
Its light is fading as it regress
As its wick becomes less and less

They say a man who’s on the edge
Will grab a knife, blood on its blade
When in doubt and you hesitate
Do what is right, in God have faith!

His world is spinning and He is dizzy
It’s like Vertigo, take it easy
He’s out of breath and deeply in pain
All of these things, is it in vain?

Looking up He’s going blind
Questions hanging in his mind
Leaving his loved ones behind
Answers soon He hopes He’d find

A gulp of air last taken
His heart stops and limbs stiffen
His eyelids are slowly closing
As life is gone and tears are falling

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 3/24/2016 7:04:00 PM
Christopher Vidal, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 3/24/2016 9:38:00 PM
Thanks Linda! It means a lot to me! With much appreciation and love, >> Christopher
Date: 1/16/2016 5:15:00 PM
that was a deep read... thank you for sharing. SKAT
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Date: 1/17/2016 10:54:00 PM
Thanks SKAT for the nice words! You're welcome!>> Christopher
Date: 11/2/2015 3:06:00 AM
Thought-provoking write, kabayan. Death being the ultimate experience, we can only surmise how it feels. Good one! Keep writing and posting. Come and visit as well. hugs!
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Christopher Vidal
Date: 11/2/2015 10:30:00 PM
Salamat Kim.
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Christopher Vidal
Date: 11/2/2015 6:13:00 AM
Thanks Kim for the kind and inspiring words! I appreciate it! Recently lost my cousin and these words came to my mind. I'll do that, hug you back! -- Christopher
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