Life On the Farm

Sitting on the hay
I see the animals play
What a gorgeous day
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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March 12, 2009 at 5:33 PM
Dear Elizabeth, Did YOU grow up on a farm ?After Reading this it would be hard to convince me other wise The content perfectly describes The Title I am putting YOU in my Favorite POETs file LOVE YOU...HG
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February 12, 2009 at 2:26 PM
Nice rhyming haiku, loved the imagery...keep it up...Raul
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February 8, 2009 at 8:48 PM
Awesome haiku, Elizabeth. I love how you made it rhyme! Love, Robin
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February 8, 2009 at 6:23 PM
Takes me back to the farm I grew up on...loved it!
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February 8, 2009 at 3:44 PM
I have a few of those and I love to watch them play! Laura :)
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February 8, 2009 at 3:36 PM
I grew up in a small rural town in central Minnesota and can remember times like this on relatives' farms. Thank you for allowing me to smile with this one. Thanks also for your kind words on my poetry. Keep on writing! Karen
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