Life On the Edge

Here from the ledge
eye for detail is really quite keen
seen from the sills, giving new edge
to life stretching flat, where black and white
is neatly sketched 
in a bird's eye view of reasoning 

Into two directions, 
we flap our wings, flying into a sun
running from truth
swimming with fear
in a pool of despair
or do we stare
into the cool
Into reflection deep in the soul
Do we turn eyes away,  with a conscience brightly peeled?
Or yield, to a new peace of mind?

Is this a game...
played by a fool
What are the odds,  given the choice
to turn away eyes..........miss all the fun...
or take plunge, and try?

Here from the ledge
we can rise to the task, shaped by our will
to deal our own cards, to deal a new hand
Win, lose or draw...there are books still unwritten
We can wave the white flag,  at the expense of the heart
Is that mote in the eye the color of steel.....
Are we too numb to feel?....Give it a try!
Taking a part
Like Nike says........just do it!



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Inspired by Deb's Picture Collection & Contest:
"What Do You Make of This?"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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March 23, 2013 at 12:30 PM
CARRIE, congratulations with your awesome and wonderful poem. Always~ Linda
Guzzi Avatar
March 22, 2013 at 7:01 PM
Thanks so much for the entry Carrie! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Dietrich Avatar
March 14, 2013 at 11:55 PM
love your metaphors here and how you ended with Nike's motto!! So cool. I have not even attempted to THINK of what to do for this particular contest!
Henderson Avatar
March 14, 2013 at 1:01 AM
very good thoughts and outstaning flow here girl. Me thinks you have scored another winner.
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