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Life On Mars

If there is life on Mars they won't want us. That's because we're so corrupt. Even mice on Mars would have more sense than we on Earth who are so dense. If they see us coming, they'll get their guns. Blast us to pieces, have their fun. No planet would accept we silly fools. After decimating, desecrating, leaving pools of blood and bodies on our wasted land. Earth's survival did not go to plan. Move over Mars, we're wading in, to pillage, plunder and commit sin against all living things that breathe. That may support us, if you please. So dumb and dimwitted earthlings be They eat you whole, just for their tea. Put up a STOP sign, warn them well. Then empty all your nuclear shells. If there's life on Mars, they won't want to die. So, so long earthlings...adieu...goodbye.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/23/2016 5:19:00 AM
Great write that would have made the late Ray Bradbury envious. Congratulations.
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Jean Murray
Date: 5/23/2016 1:55:00 PM
I am envious that you know of the late Ray Bradbury and I have not a clue.
Date: 5/13/2016 2:34:00 AM
Jean, congrats on your "Life On Mars" Win...LINDA
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Jean Murray
Date: 5/13/2016 2:37:00 AM
Thank you Linda.
Date: 5/12/2016 12:51:00 PM
Simply awesome,congratulations!
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Jean Murray
Date: 5/12/2016 1:16:00 PM
Thank you Sara.
Date: 5/12/2016 10:01:00 AM
Wow, Jean, I love how you addressed this theme! Congratulations on your wonderful placement on the podium! 7, Hugs, Sandra
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Jean Murray
Date: 5/12/2016 1:15:00 PM
Slowly but surely, I am climbing to top spot Sandra. It's thrilling.
Date: 5/12/2016 5:38:00 AM
How wonderful!! This is an amazing idea; Congratulations on your amazing win!! :) :)
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Jean Murray
Date: 5/12/2016 1:13:00 PM
And thank you for your congratulations Sneha.
Date: 5/12/2016 4:26:00 AM
Jean, congrats on your wonderful placement in Brian Davey's Life On Mars contest!
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Jean Murray
Date: 5/12/2016 1:12:00 PM
Thank you for taking the time to comment Balveen.
Date: 5/12/2016 2:31:00 AM
I envision the same story as you do in this write! Great message to all of us earthlings who read this, we need to get our acts together don't we? Congrats on your placement in my contest!
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Jean Murray
Date: 5/12/2016 1:11:00 PM
And there I was telling Silent One I thought no one but he liked it. I am so pleased Brian. Thank you.
Date: 5/6/2016 11:41:00 PM
absolutely marvelous! great job ... CayCay
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Jean Murray
Date: 5/7/2016 3:19:00 AM
To get such recognition from fellow poets is marvelous to me CayCay. Thank you so much.

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