Life On a Tree

Beneath the leaves and branches hanging over me
 I take time and look up above 
 a different world lives up amongst the leaves
Bird, bees, and butterflies, a variety of species.
  With each new dawn begins a crisp new day.
 I  hear, singing, chirping from miles away
Bees, wasps, insects galore, going about their business,  
Spreading pollen to all the flowers
Seeking out nectar, in flowers so sweet.
The birds, fly swiftly, from branch to branch
The air comes alive with chirping melodies,
the butterfly flutters without hardly a sound.
As the day progresses, a lot goes on
The insects come to feed, on leaves or bark
crawling endlessly, always on the search for food.
As dusk begins to fall and the sky is turning red
When the world is sleeping, with darkness of night
Life still goes, and there is movement
Under the pale moonlit night
Life goes on beneath the leaves and branches hanging over me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
November 5, 2011 at 10:07 PM
I read this lovely one again. I think it is one of your best.
Ball Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 11:45 AM
Isn't Nature grand! You paint a lovely picture here. Nice job. God Bless, JB
Derequito Avatar
April 18, 2011 at 9:41 AM
I love this one, the imageries that it evokes. Reminds me that despite it all, it's still a beautiful world. Nice write, Phyl.
Foulk Avatar
April 12, 2011 at 7:59 PM
a most beautiful creative piece of poetry
Sweetheart Avatar
March 23, 2011 at 8:38 AM
thankxx Phyl for your gracious comments on my poetry. get yourself a good thesaurus and dictionary combination book and words will pop out at u luv... your vocab will increase in leaps and bounds.. but your words are always precious to me my friend..luv..
Mehta Avatar
March 23, 2011 at 5:04 AM
Trees are the work of God, a creation par excellence, Phyllis
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March 22, 2011 at 8:10 PM
amazing how your work captivates beautY,pouring out comfort,and peace ,love and God Bless you,thanks for reading my poems and inspiring me
Sweetheart Avatar
March 20, 2011 at 7:22 PM
Many thankxx Phyl for reading my poetry and your warm and always welcome comments my friend.. hope u had a wonderful weekend luv..
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March 19, 2011 at 8:10 AM
I love it Phyllis, its all awaited beauty.. enjoyed..p.d.
Sweetheart Avatar
March 19, 2011 at 12:01 AM
Spring is so very close we can touch it but snow is in our forecast for middle of the week so your words are warmth to me Phyllis .. and full of wonderful visuals to view my friend.. happy weekend..luv..
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March 18, 2011 at 4:45 PM
This is a very welcomed write dear poet ! Now, I wait for spring and all the blessings from Jehovah God, our Almighty, to satisfy our desperate desire for those prescious spring displays ! TY for this awesome write Phyllis ! Have a great weekend ! much love, james
Kendrick Avatar
March 18, 2011 at 3:37 PM
Very expressive and descriptive work..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for stopping by my blog..Today is the third day and it is the worst so they used to say so everything should start improving overnight..Sara
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March 18, 2011 at 2:56 PM
Seeing this true prompted some deep thinking, Phyllis. You have painted a very detailed and thought-provoking portrait of this tree! Awesome. (I sometimes find myself in deep reflection when I look at the night sky.) Love, Carolyn
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March 16, 2011 at 11:14 PM
This is so perceptive of all the life on that tree, under it too! I have sometimes sat looking at a tree and thinking of all the activity that is actually there. It really is amazing! thanks for putting up this new poem for me to see tonight. I think I will get to bed now. Glad this is my last reply for the night to my sweet friend. LUv, Andrea
Brown Avatar
March 16, 2011 at 11:04 AM
I am stopping by today to say a special Thank You for your kind comments Phyllis. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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