Life On a Hitchhike

Life on a hitchhike

A cool drool drip slid to the corner of a slit shut
mouth. Eyes that once FLASHED reared back and humbled
into occular armpits,  no explanation. Hands that once
felt warmth and high hopes slowly tremmored twitching
careless as unmatter of fact. I watch the
flesh depart,  skin crawling with old breakfast
sausage  patty indifference. Postage due----Royal flesh
does not win. Careful.   External refuse
hidden bonds  confide in mass abuse of internal
bliss like  factory worker, paydayholiday Friday. Say
goodbye like used coffee grounds  At last gasp I
set sockets against a blank ceiling scanning with 
eyes aglee and a wave in omnidirectional fervor.
Too finite? Numb and neutral with nothing at stake
I praise a restless content over a form boring of
less than glib compose and promote a position of
erectile tissue and ooooze about time ,  space
swaying to and fro for this invisible temptation
at arms------------------------------------------length

dave collins, "Yes", 1/89, Wash D.C.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Romaine Avatar
March 10, 2015 at 9:12 AM
Hey Dave, congratulations on your poem being featured. Deeply expressed and filled with lots of imagery. Be Blessed, Neva
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December 19, 2013 at 1:47 PM
Dave, . Congratulations, and thank you for supporting the Ballad contest.... Forever- Linda
Davis Avatar
November 16, 2013 at 11:36 AM
Dave This is a powerful and deep writing. You can make the reader think with the words you compose that are strong and intense. Nice job
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November 1, 2013 at 5:34 AM
Dave, Your poetry approaches the point of overwhelming the reader... Fighting to understand it is tiring at times... That does not diminish the caliber of your writing... You write astounding poetry....I will read more and comment as I feel qualified to do so... Let's keep in touch..... Regards.... Jake
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