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Life of Universe

Life of Universe void was cosmos. no matter, no energy, neither time nor space. any master plan? was there any creator? mighty power: God? an abstract concept to be followed by science or philosophy. big bang exploded. energy, matter appeared. space sets, time was on. basic science proves ‘you can’t create energy. It is well conserved.’ explosion released the existing energy. birth of universe. universe expands. galaxies recede away. It’s continuous. will the expansion of universes stop on some stage. will it ever last? will it ever crush on big crunch, leaving Cosmos just in vacuum? 12/06/20 First Place 'Any Short Forms' contest by Brian Strand

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Date: 12/8/2020 7:59:00 PM
A beautiful and thought-provoking set of haiku, Anisha. Congratulations for your excellent win in Brian's contest. Warmest wishes and hugs.. ~Susan
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Date: 12/7/2020 1:12:00 PM
Beautiful string of haiku with a discussion of creation, hints of Genesis and science. Wonderfully crafted Anisha! Congratulations and blessings to you!
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Date: 12/7/2020 5:02:00 AM
Nice write Anisha...Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 12/5/2020 8:16:00 AM
You did this well, but I do not think it is a tanka..
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 12/5/2020 9:14:00 AM
Sorry, its haiku. Thank you to notify. Rectified. Blessing

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