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Life Mistake Were Many In Silence Wrung

Life Mistake Were Many In Silence Wrung

I got married a child and far to young
With no life experience, seasons stung
Charlatan future sticking out its tongue
Pretending life was a concert that swung
Son born full piss and vinegar I clung
Then one day my prince came when my head hung
He sang songs unsung and the chain lock sprung
To feel, think, love, in arms I was among

Life Mistake Were Many In Silence Wrung

6/27/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
June 28, 2016 at 3:55 PM
wow, eve,this would be much like what i would be writing about but my ending not the same!! I stayed put. Guess it is not so bad. I really like this.
Gupta Avatar
June 28, 2016 at 7:38 AM
Lovely moments in beautiful monorhyme ... Enjoyed reading your touching work ...
Allison Avatar
June 28, 2016 at 1:16 AM
I love the quotation you found to accompany the poem - many people marry young it didn't work out but have found true happiness second time round - we need to look forward not back at the past:-) hugs Jan xx7
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