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Life Mistake Were Many In Silence Wrung I got married a child and far to young With no life experience, seasons stung Charlatan future sticking out its tongue Pretending life was a concert that swung Son born full piss and vinegar I clung Then one day my prince came when my head hung He sang songs unsung and the chain lock sprung To feel, think, love, in arms I was among Life Mistake Were Many In Silence Wrung 6/27/2016

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Date: 6/28/2016 3:55:00 PM
wow, eve,this would be much like what i would be writing about but my ending not the same!! I stayed put. Guess it is not so bad. I really like this.
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Date: 6/28/2016 7:38:00 AM
Lovely moments in beautiful monorhyme ... Enjoyed reading your touching work ...
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Date: 6/28/2016 1:16:00 AM
I love the quotation you found to accompany the poem - many people marry young it didn't work out but have found true happiness second time round - we need to look forward not back at the past:-) hugs Jan xx7
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