Life Long Gone

If my hunger held you over
there would be nothing you would need
you could dine on my desire
and be sated from the feed

If my words were strong enough 
you could be kept from the cold
I would wrap you in the verses
with the stories I have told

If my aching cleanses wrongs
redemption would be found
apologies and intentions
leave me tethered to the ground

If my sadness makes you real
then real you seem to be
I have a purpose urging
sadly longing to be free
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

A   Avatar
March 11, 2016 at 1:25 PM
deep write, Caitlin...Linda
Nutter Avatar
December 15, 2009 at 2:54 AM
Excellent write full of emotion and meaning. Enjoyed the read. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace