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LIFE LED BY THE THOUGHTS OF ANOTHER

"Life led by the thoughts of another...can never be your own" No matter the success you garner You might just be another's clone Life led by the thoughts of another. You are wasting your life my brother Let this today to you be known You are drowning in mediocrity's water. You allow your essence away be blown The life you live is yours no longer There is nothing worthwhile to gain in Life led by the thoughts of another. PS: Inspired by Carol Sunshine Brown's Monoku titled SELF (In double quote above) Placed 5th in Richard Lamoureux's Pick A Line Any Line Poetry Contest.

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Date: 9/18/2013 2:14:00 PM
Alozor, .......congratulations..... luv ~SKAT~
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Date: 9/14/2013 10:18:00 AM
congrats on your win :)
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Alozor Michael Ikechukwu
Date: 9/19/2013 6:27:00 AM
Thanks Sandy, love, always.
Date: 9/13/2013 8:30:00 PM
Alozar, --A beautiful poem and line... congratulations :-)...xox~ LINDA
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Alozor Michael Ikechukwu
Date: 9/13/2013 9:16:00 PM
Thank you my dear. Love, always, AM I.
Date: 9/13/2013 10:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning place Alozor xx
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Alozor Michael Ikechukwu
Date: 9/13/2013 11:11:00 AM
Thanks my dear.
Date: 9/13/2013 9:02:00 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, Alozor
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Alozor Michael Ikechukwu
Date: 9/13/2013 9:59:00 AM
Thank you sir. You are a super writer sir.
Date: 9/13/2013 8:53:00 AM
Well done, thanks for entering my contest.
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Alozor Michael Ikechukwu
Date: 9/13/2013 9:58:00 AM
Welcome sir, thanks for providing the platform.