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Life Is Tragic

"Life is tragic so listen with thirst for the music of happiness." Quote _by Poet
Life is a journey full of moments - of struggle, for a poet the gathering of emotions; the penning of poems that one day will crumble, of words that crash together like waves in oceans. And my journey has been the road of a writer, I have written of the scars on my soul and heart; I have penned of nature and the birds that flutter, and I suppose I will till the day I depart. And when the day comes that is to be my last one, I would pen- even if just in my fading mind; a tale, the story of how it had all begun, I would leave all my delight and sorrow entwined. My last poem- the last would be heartbreak and bliss, hold a song full of birds singing a cappella; I would walk a Zen garden into an abyss, and stroll in the falling rain with no umbrella. Life is a journey full of moments - of struggle, and my journey has been the road of a writer; and when the day comes that is to be my last one, my last poem- the last would be heartbreak and bliss. _____________________ November 28, 2020 Poetry/Rhyme/Life is Tragic Copyright Protected, ID 11-1308-195-28 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, The Last 1 sponsor, Anthony Biaanco, Judged 02/03/2021 Fifth Place

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Date: 2/3/2021 3:29:00 PM
Elegant bit of rhyming entwining rich content. The closing end rhymes were really quite clever. All in all, this is a masterful bit of poetry. Congratulations on your placement.
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Constance La France
Date: 2/4/2021 4:58:00 AM
Greg, thank you for the wonderful comment, compliment and congratulations _Constance
Date: 2/3/2021 2:38:00 PM
Constance, a big CONGRATS on your well-deserved win with this lovely, moving poem! Janice
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Constance La France
Date: 2/4/2021 4:59:00 AM
Janice, thank you for the compliment and the congrats, appreciate _Constance
Date: 12/6/2020 12:11:00 PM
I Ike the delight and sorrow entwined. I must remark that your poetry really does lean it’s wonderful images to the joys in your soul over the scars.
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Constance La France
Date: 12/7/2020 1:43:00 PM
Sally, thanks so much for that lovely comment and compliment _Constance
Date: 12/5/2020 10:59:00 PM
Great example, Constance.
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Constance La France
Date: 12/7/2020 1:43:00 PM
Eve, thank you and looking forward to reading your poem _Constance
Date: 12/1/2020 4:34:00 AM
This is brilliant, Constance... a sure winner for the contest and such a wonderful example for your contest!!! I love your idea for this - so creative! God bless you sweet lady! This is certainly a favorite for me
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Date: 12/1/2020 11:44:00 AM
Gina, thank you for the compliment and the FAV _Constance
Date: 11/30/2020 1:30:00 PM
I went slowly through your lines so I may not interrupt the flow of your emotions. An excellent paint, Constance!!
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Constance La France
Date: 12/1/2020 11:45:00 AM
Newton, thank you for the visit and the compliment, yes, I paint pictures with words _Constance
Date: 11/29/2020 3:10:00 PM
“My journey has been the road of a writer”- this explains the “why we write” for many poets here I dare guess. Bravo!
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Date: 11/29/2020 5:23:00 PM
Caren, thanks for visiting my poem and the compliment, I like that line too _Constance

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