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Life Is Too Simple

Mankind is just a lucid mist life is floating on a whisper’s wane Death is prowling on a good-bye kiss We are drifting over treacherous terrain Life is floating on a whisper’s wane Soon to fall from the motionless air We are drifting over treacherous terrain Lost in doubts and deep despair Soon to fall from the motionless air Death is prowling on a good-bye kiss Lost in doubts and deep despair Mankind is just a lucid mist

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Wilma Neels

Date: 8/4/2010 6:13:00 AM

Awesome entry for Dr's contest Earle, thank you for your comment as well.. Wilma

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/2/2010 5:21:00 PM

Thanks, Earle for supporting my contest

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/2/2010 5:07:00 PM

Interesting Pantoum that should do well in the contest if an entry..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/2/2010 4:54:00 PM

Earle, I so agree with you. It is to simple, at the end we just up and leave. Enjoyed your poem have yourself a wonder simple life,,the title is very catchy,..p.d.