Earle Brown Poet Pantoum

Life Is Too Simple

Mankind is just a lucid mist
life is floating on a whisper’s wane 
Death is prowling on a good-bye kiss
We are drifting over treacherous terrain
Life is floating on a whisper’s wane 
Soon to fall from the motionless air
We are drifting over treacherous terrain
Lost in doubts and deep despair
Soon to fall from the motionless air 
Death is prowling on a good-bye kiss
Lost in doubts and deep despair
Mankind is just a lucid mist

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Wilma Neels August 4, 2010 at 6:13 AM Awesome entry for Dr's contest Earle, thank you for your comment as well.. Wilma

Dr.Ram Mehta August 2, 2010 at 5:21 PM Thanks, Earle for supporting my contest

Sara Kendrick August 2, 2010 at 5:07 PM Interesting Pantoum that should do well in the contest if an entry..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara

Poet Destroyer A August 2, 2010 at 4:54 PM Earle, I so agree with you. It is to simple, at the end we just up and leave. Enjoyed your poem have yourself a wonder simple life,,the title is very catchy,..p.d.