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Life Is So Cruel

I met you yesterday by chance You introduced me to your new lover How I contorted my lips into a smile It felt like such a painful grimace O it was a mighty effort I half wondered if it fooled anyone How I maintained that fake smile To hide the tears inside There it was so outstretched I remember calling on muscles To pry these lips apart How I mustered to utter words I’ll never understand ‘It’s nice to meet you’ As I held my head high I couldn’t wait for the moment We could collapse Me and my lie AP: Honorable Mention 2022 Submitted on April 27, 2020 for contest STRAND PICK G sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 1ST and on September 6, 2018 for contest WRITE ME AN EMOTION-ACT sponsored by BRENDA CHIRI

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Date: 4/29/2020 8:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. You told it like it is. Guess we have all been there. It is no fun at all. Enjoy your day and your win..........
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Date: 4/29/2020 3:40:00 PM
So much truth and feeling in this Line. I think you have truly defined that experience. Love It!
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Date: 4/29/2020 6:11:00 PM
Thanks, Lonna. Much appreciated.
Date: 4/29/2020 11:24:00 AM
BIG CONGRATS to win TOP. Love.
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Date: 4/29/2020 2:15:00 PM
Thank you, Anisha. Much appreciated.
Date: 4/29/2020 6:35:00 AM
Well done Line, on the Oscar-worthy acting job, and the #1 placement today. Be well ~ John
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Date: 4/29/2020 7:27:00 AM
Thank you for your much appreciated visit and comment, John.
Date: 9/7/2018 6:44:00 PM
wow, I love the way you described that awful moment. Great free verse writing.
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Date: 9/7/2018 10:56:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea. Most appreciated.
Date: 9/6/2018 11:43:00 PM
Been there and felt that! Great poem. Great finish.
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Date: 9/7/2018 10:57:00 PM
Thank you, Timothy. Most appreciated.
Date: 9/6/2018 4:52:00 PM
So glad I have never been though this moment, for now, I feel like I know what it would have felt like.
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Date: 9/7/2018 10:58:00 PM
Disappointments come in varying degrees... it's all the same. Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Caren.

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