Life Is Not Fair

We love - we loes 
                                             We care  - we bruise 
                        Life is not fair that what we should learn
                    But never forget to have faith and grow strong
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Sage Avatar
February 9, 2016 at 7:32 AM
Such precious positive poem penned by you Dalia, clever thought and optimistic write
Shahein Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 5:58 PM
Thank you very much my dear, I really do appreciate it, hugs / / :)
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January 10, 2016 at 4:42 PM
Two of the most powerful forces in the universe are Words and Faith and you have displayed both here in this wonderful write.
Shahein Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 6:30 PM
Thank you so much my dear for ur supportive, sweet words and for your delightful visit, it's much appreciated, hugs / / :)
Bickerstaffe Avatar
December 27, 2015 at 12:51 PM
Such marvelous sentiment... Your first and second lines are so powerful, and your last line is so precious! I might print this and hang it over my bed with your permission! Well done Dalia!! Best wishes, Keith
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December 27, 2015 at 12:59 PM
Oh my dear I'm do honored , that would be my pleasure ...oh my friend thank u so much for ur sweet sweet and lovely comment , I really do appreciate it , words like yours is what gives me the inspiration to write...I thank you from the bottom of my heart...lot of love and hugs / / :D
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December 20, 2015 at 8:04 AM
if it were easy, Life would be unappreciated....if it were perfect, all problems would be anticipated....the PURPOSE of Life is for us to grow strong....on the journey of Enlightenment To Find A Heavenly Home....;)
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December 20, 2015 at 9:29 AM
Ur definitely right , we suffer to live and we live to suffer , we have pain so we can know that we still can feel , and in pain sometimes we find pleasure....life is complicated but we love it , we must never lose faith and must never give up we should always find our own way to grow strong....thank you very much my friend for ur amazing feedback I appreciate it and I wish you a merry Christmas....
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