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Life Is Not About Who I Once Was

I was once, a little child with no idea of who I would grow up to be.
I was once, a little child wanting a hug and love.
I was once, a little child wanting a word of kinds.
I was once, a little child with anxiety, fear, and dread that swallowed me whole.
I was once, a little child that wanted a word of support.
Like the story of the Little Engine That Could.
Yes, I can.
Yes, I can.
I became the rain that began to fall in a steady drizzle.
The fresh crystalline snow that fell from the sky,
And soaked up the rays of the sun.
Waves of riffles danced through my thoughts.
Broke the chains and erected walls
Taking the child farther and farther away.
Feeling the wind upon my face
Beneath the light of the full moon
To new advantages.
I became the bird that flew across the sky,
The trickle of water from melting snow,
The movement that ran upstream,
The breath of air that filled my lungs.
I became the seconds and the hours
That brought the day and nights.
Lost myself in a new life.
Fears disappeared
And self-esteem grew with dreams.


11/13/20202


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Life Is Not About Who You Once Were.
It’s About Who You Are Now, 
and Who You Have the Potential To Be.
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Carber Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 9:40 AM
A belated congrats, Eve-i had a cybernetic problem!
Andresen Avatar
November 18, 2020 at 3:18 AM
- Congratulations on your great 2nd place in the contest, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Edmonds  Avatar
November 17, 2020 at 4:24 PM
It’s not easy getting through difficult starts, but you did and so did I. Love the way you became all those beautiful things, that’s what you are, a beautiful soul, writing beautiful poetry. Congratulations on your much deserved win... Belle
Robinson Jr. Avatar
November 17, 2020 at 10:14 AM
Loved this poem from the first line to the last, Eve. It brought to mind the song, "Stillness is the Move," by Dirty Projectors. Your essence of being is soulfully felt. Thanks for graciously sharing a part of your heart. Splendid poetry. Love and best wishes for the holiday.
One Avatar
November 17, 2020 at 10:07 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Proxenos Avatar
November 17, 2020 at 5:59 AM
A wonderful write Eve my friend, and as for your pic, you have melted my heart! Good luck in the contest. Hugs and Blessings, Jennifer.
Y. Avatar
November 16, 2020 at 7:59 AM
Hi Even, You have penned such a well-written entry for the content. Good introspective write. It showed me a glimpse of you. Thanks for sharing this gem. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Have a nice day:-) Alexis
Ashley Avatar
November 15, 2020 at 10:39 AM
Eve, your golden pen spills with the treasure of textured imagery and emotions. Such a beautiful introspection of an evolving life experiencing the lovely shades of growth and positive change. I especially love your last line for a grand finale to an exquisite piece. Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan
Nicole Avatar
November 14, 2020 at 9:13 PM
I am so happy that we have met here through words. You are an amazing woman. An inspiration to us all. Your thoughts caress gently around me. You are right, it is about "Who You Have the Potential To Be" Thank you Eve, for being You. :) Hugs, Brandy
Rose  Avatar
November 14, 2020 at 5:41 PM
I like the part where self esteem grew with the dreams at your side. How precious life is, it grows more dearer with each passing day, love you Eve . Thank you for being in my life. xo
Buhagiar Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 10:41 PM
A cameo from your life. ~~
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