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Life Is Not A Sprint

Loving someone is just like running
You two try your best 
To get used to each other
You make every effort to run
It's okey for the first lap
You keep your strength at the second
What about next
Life is not about sprint
It's like long-distance running
Let me ask you how far you can run
I want to tell an old saying
Take a rest if you feel tired
If you are tired to run, then walk
Watch the scenery and have a chat
It would be much better than
Forcing yourself running.

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Date: 11/7/2024 10:59:00 PM
great poem, i love the analysis here of love, very interesting, thanks poet
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Hugo Sarvida Jr.
Date: 11/8/2024 12:19:00 AM
You're intelligent, Yann. You reach my reasoning prowess. Thank you, I appreciate your comment, Yann.

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