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Life Is Like Monopoly

Fake banknotes,
Bought hotel,
Went to jail.

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Joyce Johnson

Date: 6/3/2011 6:48:00 PM

And so it goes. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/3/2011 5:35:00 PM

LOL well that did not take long? a man who is direct and to the point! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/3/2011 2:27:00 PM

Congrats Jack on your fantastic win with this excellent poetry in the contest.. your writes amuse and amaze me in one breath luv.. hope to see your gold star soon.. enjoy...

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/3/2011 11:43:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Judy's "Monopoly" contest Jack. Love, Carol

Dr Hitendra Mehta

Date: 6/3/2011 11:02:00 AM

Many congrats Jack on clinching 3rd spot in Judy's contest. Luv & best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

Dr Hitendra Mehta

Date: 6/3/2011 11:01:00 AM

Many congrats Jack on clinching 3rd spot in Judy's contest. Luv & best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/3/2011 8:58:00 AM

My congratulations on the third place win in the contest of judy, jack

Judy Konos

Date: 6/3/2011 8:26:00 AM

Thank you for entering my contest

Gert W. Knop

Date: 5/20/2011 6:21:00 AM

So funny Jack, just read Carolyn's comment about aliens!! I was quite interested in books like "The Philadelphia Experiment" or "The Bermuda Triangle"! I well belive that the US Govt still holds a number of evidences. We here have to be careful with false 50 Euro notes coming from Poland. You'll be glad to hold on the good old British Pound so!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/19/2011 9:01:00 PM

Hey, i think this monopoly guy forgot to roll a double... kidding... i like the broke notes... I'm a master at monopoly... I wipe them all out... lol.. i guess ,, the peeps i play with don't know we poets think before every move... yes we are sneaky... and they can all go to jail.. while we collect 200... you take care now... and thanks for the smile,..p.d.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/19/2011 3:16:00 PM

Jack, were Barney and Betty Hill the elderly New England couple who claimed to have been abducted by aliens? If so, YES. I am very familiar with this case. I read a lot of books on UFOs and alien abductions. Embryonic Time Travelers was inspired by a book written by an abductee. She claimed they were humans from the future trying to replenish the gene pool. Love, Carolyn

James Foulk

Date: 5/19/2011 11:06:00 AM

really enjoyed this one jack, a great Senryu, thank you for commenting on Green Leaves,

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/19/2011 5:29:00 AM

I enjoy reading your awesome poetry this morning Jack. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/19/2011 4:20:00 AM

Your infectious evil senryu has been caught like a bad disease...ha ha. My mother says I should stay away from u! ha ha. Gwendolen

Kash Poet

Date: 5/19/2011 12:44:00 AM

haha,nice write.Enjoyed.Best wishes.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/18/2011 3:24:00 PM

:) Thanks for the laugh, Jack. I know a good bail bondsman if you need one. LOL Best wishes in the Monopoly contest! Love, Carolyn

Ashley Plotczyk

Date: 5/18/2011 3:10:00 PM

You bring humor to the truth. Nice job.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/18/2011 2:51:00 PM

Yep, you wrote a death row senryu, Jack!! ha ha. U are totally crackin me up! Thanks for inspiring me to jump into the contest with a sappy write NOT about death row! ha ah. Gwendolen

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/18/2011 1:55:00 PM

haha, that's thinking outside the box!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/18/2011 1:48:00 PM

Jack u sure do have a knack for this witty humor and it comes out fine my friend.. tell it like it is in reality land.. good one for the contest ...good luck with luv..

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/18/2011 1:16:00 PM

WEirdest thing ever. Beneath this comment is a photo advertisement to stop the death penalty for someone...the word monopoly prompted this? Ohhhh, so dark and evil of you, Jack! Back to your work...this senryu is fun and comical both..playful write! Best in the contest. Gwendolen

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/18/2011 1:12:00 PM

Witty and humrous as a limerick should be, jack

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